Black Poetry : I love those Bronze horns

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by AACOOLDRE, Sep 17, 2001.

  1. AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love those bronze horns

    Making splashes in our waterbed countercurrent
    Your two legs are erected like a bull’s horns
    She cast her eyes in the bedroom mirror
    The water reflected her double mighty powerful horns,
    And the baby oil that shines my behind

    For there’s much power in the swords of her legs
    Especially when legs/horns rise upward high
    It’s symbolic of fertile soil ready to boil
    May I drop thy seed in this here Black mud?

    While in subterraneous heat I couldn’t see her horns
    Because I kissed her lips a thousand times with vibratory motions
    And I couldn’t take my eyes off her brown eyes
    Those sexy legs does wonders for elevated gravity

    The more pleasure the lesser the gravity
    I contemplated this is the reason why
    Her legs metamorphosed into bronze horns
    Isis in her regal stance wore them proudly upon her crowns too

    My milky wax has now escaped my body
    I stained it all on her feet and toes
    Then her legs became crooked and started to fall
    Her legs now wash up in the waterbed stream,
    Her enormous chasms ceased

    Now her feets rest and lay still
    They are drying up on the shore of my thighs now
    She gives me a thank you kiss; I released her confession
    She admitted her passion by saying: “God **** I was real horny”

    By Andre Austin
     
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    REPLY TO AACOOLDRE

    AACOOLDRE, this is the greatest

    Great poem you have made
    Now go and seize a great day

    Please show me some of your love
    Today read and reply to my thread entitled:
    " Dear Alpha Male, please help me, signed the slave from torment land"
    Please tell me about my skills, tell me if their weak
    or show nuff real----------Thank You
    If you read and replied once!
    Do it again, kick up a notch!----------Thank you
     
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    Eloquently phrased, but still a sizzla, I'd love to read a flow like this again.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome drop here love it great pull up and bring back
     
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    (looking) Oh! excuse me
    I came in the wrong room! LOL

    Never heard leggz described as
    Bronze Horns, But the discripition
    of their role was definately HOTT!

    Loving this piece! Keep 'em comming!!!
     
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    yo..you took this to another level man...
    it's so easy to talk about sex
    but to talk about sex from a obtuse vantage point
    is a tad more difficult...but you did it with ease...
    nice piece dun....
    one love
    khasm
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmmmmm :read: i see i see :read: oooooookayyy :read: :eeek:
    hehehe i gotta second brotha Khasms sentiments...this wasnt what you would expect...
    but the treat was real subtle and enjoyable indeed...horns huh lol alrighty my brotha :)
     
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