Black Poetry : I LOVE IT THAT WE ALL GONNA DIE.pt2

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  1. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i woke up this mornin pissed cuz the world is still here n we are all alive
    God i dont understand i woke up to the opposite of what i wanted why
    i was hopin to wake up to judgement day
    so we can decide the punishment for these people at the pearly gates
    GOD im sick my head heavily aches
    eveyday is hunger pains,my belly aches
    i surrender my life to you,im ready for faith
    GOD u gave but now as ur good friend i think is time 2 take
    to die or 2 live is the same thing 2 me
    either way im gon be great
    i guess they are all scared good im glad they all afraid
    they wanna live,they want another chance 2 make mistakes
    wot they love was of the flesh so the devil took control
    is either they forgot or they dont know how 2 be of the soul
    U FOOLS wot good is power wealth
    if u c poor people dyin and u dont wanna help
    tell me what good is it when u cant promise a sick child health

    ....this is turnin 2 be soft i will continue when im more mad.....
     
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    First of all, my poem is actually a rap. Secondly, you woke up pissed and you ended the poem softly. It doesn't sound like you need anymore anger. You may need a little more Love and Care. That poem that I wrote has pieces from a song on my up and coming lp, That NU NU.
     
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    Quess what!!
    Brother, the madder you get, the better you live. Total dis-satisfaction only brings ...100% goals toward "Satisfaction"
    Death proves nothing, steps ...will! getting madder, my friend is just the beginning.
    Here's to the MADDESS ...^5
     
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    yea i tot dat was a rap.
    lp comin out good 4 u...
    wud love 2 listen 2 some of ya music.
    mine is here will be puttin new material soon.


     
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    Through anger we can sometimes sort out solutions. Keep giving us food for thought poet.
     
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    peace love n blessings
     
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    deep joint getting mad brings better days ahead
     
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