Black Poetry : I Love Him, Strong

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Aug 31, 2005.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love him strong like that
    when I'm curiously awakened with a start
    from a sound sleep, no noises to rouse
    me, other than the thump of his heart
    I love him hard like that
    when his opinions force me to think
    enunciated potently and gruff leaving
    their imprint with Nubian ink
    I love him deep like that
    as he's able to capture me with his soul
    kissing me with his reasons
    embracing my uniqueness whole
    I love him long like that
    farther than it takes to reach that star
    we both wish upon, eons more than it takes
    to reach eternity from where we are
    I love him, strong
     
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    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Love

    Now you know this was tight. Excellent!
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was beautiful watzinaname! I'm going to have to coin that title.
    When they ask I'll just say, I love him strong!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    holding him close and strong very nice flow sista
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you thought it was tight Poetrymama, you've been on a roll lately poet, thank you.
    If you say you like the title, then I must be on to something Wisdom7. Thank you for those kind words poet.
    That's how I have to hold him Rich. Thank you for your support.
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    when i read stuff like this
    i wonder does the other party realize what they really have
    do they really?
    i wonder


    DSS
     
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    My sister you seem to be able to express yourself within a short space yet we never feel short changed by your words........ :smokin:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Da Street So'ja, sometimes you can't help but wonder if they do or not. Thank you for your response poet.
    That was quite nice of you to say caramelpython, thank you. So nice to see your face within this place brotha.
     
  9. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watzinaname this was poem was beautiful...

    loved how u flowed this poem

    ending it with a line of how u love him

    whether long
    deep or
    hard

    love is so precious...and it's definitely portrayed in this poem

    keep the flow goin

    Mz.Soull aka prizefighter 16
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your response humbles me Prizefighter16, thank you so much poet.
     
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