Quiet Poetry Lounge : I lose..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Puerto_Rocco, May 10, 2003.

  1. Puerto_Rocco

    Puerto_Rocco Member MEMBER

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    I Lose...

    Do you know the feeling of having to start a new relationship?
    Going through all the motions....
    I have to take more time to get know them, upcoming dates and events.
    Not knowing where this is going....

    Concocting the mental being and extracting the physical meaning.
    Is love-struggle ordained, all that it's worth...

    Sipping the life of goodtimes, til emptyness ask you for more.
    When negative hits the earth, the flesh of it is torn first.

    How can a simple subtract, stop all of this positve germination.?
    To feed energy two times more, from it's insemination.

    Yin and Yang is supposed to bring balance to this relation
    So do you fight the winning battle, or lose it to a replacement?

    Puerto_Rocco
    A.Arriagada
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    I know just what you mean. nice scribe.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Puerto_Rocco

    ****...I feel you.

    To fight a losing battle or lose to a replacement is the question
    Let me see....hmmmm, but from my recollection

    I'd have to let this person be
    Cuz if I don't, I may lose the battle and me

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i've been here before to wave in a lost cost
    feel ya vibe here bruh!
     
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    I like the yin and the yang
    In the song you sang-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    i know the feelin'......i'm lovin' this...
     
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