Black Poetry : I Long to Be

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Mar 14, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A gentle whisper into the breeze
    In hope you will hear me…
    Arms open wide
    Stretching
    The North winds
    Carries me
    Peacefully
    Toward you
    Catch me
    Hold me
    Embrace me
    Stroke me
    Feel me
    Lovely
    In the comfort of your arms
    I am longing to be
    Wrap in the quilt of my thoughts
    In hope
    You can hear…my whisper on the breeze
    In hope
    That the wind will carry me
    To where I long
    To be
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

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    nice flow sis
    likes this one
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    This was so peaceful and serene Blue, nice flow.
     
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    Ahhhh is all I can say!
    this was as beautiful as an autumn sunset
    Very nice
    Very nice indeed!


    Peace and Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    into the breeze
    a sweet release
    carring ya whispers
    into da skies
    where it's heard
    the peaceful warmth
    tingle my ear
    forth da love and
    tender care i hear u
    as i hold it in grasp
    sweet hush as it last
    in hope that i see u
    floating on this journey
    where ya heart should be
    i await ya arrival and have
    a place for u as my soul
    opens and arms reaching
    hoping u see me
    hoping u feel me
    i whisper come !
    in hope u hear
    as the breeze sweep
    to the south on a
    wave i pushed from
    above
    i hope u hear me
    beckoning u to come
    to a sweet release
    where two lone to be
    come !!!

    very love flow sistah Bluewater wow!!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown:

    l feel your desire oh so calmly.
    needless to say
    this one's a poetic plaque...

    :coffee:
    jh.
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    it will...it will....
    like the blue of your water
    emotions flow..
    and since/when you flow
    as nicely as you do
    the wind...whatever will carry
    you...
     
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    MMMMMMMMM........BLUE!!..........QQ
    THIS WAS SMOOOOOOOTH!!!!!
    LOVE IT!!
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello everyone:)

    hi sistah mzblkangel i am so happy you like this poem..thank you so much:heart:

    hi sistah watzinaname that you for feeling the peace in this ..thank you :heart:

    hi twision i am glad you like this flow..yet a feel of autumn ..thank you :heart:

    smiling from the heart...thank you brother Rich for the flow on...oh wow..oh oh so nice:)..thnak you:heart:

    hi brother j'hiah you are so kind..wow..thank you dear for the love:heart:

    Hi sister deepy..you thoughful words give somuch encouragement...thank you so so much:heart:

    Hi brother turtle1..*smiling* so happy you like this flow..thank you:heart:

    Thank you everyone for the love:grouphug:
     
  10. LibertyLady

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    bleu.......mmmm

    this is beautifull treu.....

    its good to love .....
    its good to be toutched...

    it makes you feel alive......

    i know the longing sis..






    Love libertylady...:heart:
     
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