Black Poetry : I like it when you say what is on your mind

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was sitting doing some thinking.
    Letting time go by.
    No pressing moments I couldn’t recover.

    When your image entered my mind.
    I realized then I should get up.
    To start my day and go.

    Maybe I’ll see you again shopping at the mall.
    Or meet you again at a store.
    I know now.
    Why I sat doing nothing.

    Timing is the key and fate is the master.

    A wind outside came in.
    Across my mind there you were.
    I knew what to do then.

    I slipped on my best clothes.
    Polished my shoes I just bought.
    Put on my cologne you told me was nice.

    Put on my best smile.
    Using all that will capture.


    Some of your time your attention is the target.

    To stand with you.
    Walk with you.
    Talk with you is all I desire.

    If I see you I won't let you get away again.
    Can’t let another opportunity pass without asking.

    Can we spend some more time?

    Maybe tomorrow or the day after.
    I want to get to know more about you.
    That’s all I'm after.

    No details unless some hints
    of interest happen to fall.

    Tried hard to not stand around.
    Standing still waiting
    hoping you are in this part of town.

    When you turned the corner
    my heart started to pound.

    Can’t blow this.
    Find the words, calm down

    She likes you too.
    Some things I kept thinking
    while I focused on you.

    Now as you stood before
    me again all fear left me.
    You did it again put me
    at ease with your nature.

    I like your character.
    You’re easy to please.

    But I won’t limit the things
    I would do for your tease.

    Tantalize my mind.
    My heart has me twisted
    for you I keep climbing.
    To meet the deep love you offer.

    Looked at my watch. Its lunch time.

    Would you like to go eat at my favorite place?

    No she said lets head back to your place.

    I like it when you say what's on your mind!
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was real nice! sweet and beautiful!:heart:
    I really enjoyed reading this!:great:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I love it when the mind is open
    makes it so much sweeter
    tyte drop Hodee.....................
     
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    Man that was hot
    Intellictually smooth
    Very nice drop poet
    Much Love
     
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    wow hodee i missed ya!!!!!! its been along time welcome back honey. i enjoyed this flo to the fullest. its nice that you allowed us to come into your world. flo on my brotha.:heart: :ilu:
     
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    Enjoyed this Hodee, it was like a short story that I didn't want to put down. Now, I'm interested, what happened next? Write some more!
     
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    More Than Happy To Let You Know.....


    As my image entered your mind, a part of me escaped,

    perhaps the reserved side, cuz I feel secure under your cape,

    seeing how you left me mesmerized with the last poetic episode,

    urges me to stroke my keyboard, and venture to romantic stanzas untold,

    Is that thorough enough for ya?

    H ave you ever closed your eyes, and let your subconscious guide you?,

    O r better yet sat under a swaying palm tree while the jet Black sand gently stings so good?,

    D etached from reality, and body surely at ease,

    E choed voices of past rendezvous sweep by hauntingly in the mid-February breeze,

    E ven if you remain a figment of my imagination,

    I'll let you know your work of art is the most beautiful of God's creation.


    :heart: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
  8. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Distance is only an after thought

    If you told me you wanted me. It wouldn’t surprise me at all. I have been thinking about you often. The situation was bound to unfold. You’re Spicy and Beautiful. I would travel many miles any day or night. Miles are like increments of nothing. To be with someone as special as you. Your fundamental nature, your strength of mind is mesmerizing too.

    Sophisticated Lady.
    Proud of your accomplishments.
    Into trying something new.
    Classy kind and considerate
    Your every thing I need.

    Black and Beautiful
    Rich in essence only you possess
    Oh you knock me to my knees.
    Woman your one of a kind
    No other ever.

    I am here on this earth.
    At this time.
    In this moment with you.
    :flowers:
     
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    *Blushes*.........

    Hodee,

    I am at a loss of words and thought,

    never imagined through the net my emotions would get caught,

    in this web of delight you've sent me to........ special delivery,

    was missing your heavenly serenades, oh the misery,

    of not seeing you post, nor your green light status,

    we're here together at Destee's, that's all that matters,

    I feel a guilt trip coming on, please tell me I'm dreaming,

    cuz if my main say my heart bleeding, boy, he'd be steaming,

    oh well......."Nothing Really Matters", I feel Lauryn Hill she wasn't lying,

    I'm a hopeless romantic, june bug rhapsody, I feel like flying,

    away to a distant land where secrecies exist no more,

    baptize me in an eternal sea of love, let my body drift ashore,

    take me by the hand, teach me a thing or two,

    till this here fantasy is fulfilled, I'll be waiting for your response BOO





    :spinstar: :spinstar: :flirt: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
  10. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A lady should say what is on her mind. It makes a long day seem so far gone. Time to relax drink some wine let me fix you a meal. Drink our favorite beverage and together just chill.

    You spelled out my name you called me to you. You turned on my love level just like I like BOO. I'm a romatic in mind body soul and life. Your sheltered your nurtured taken care of in life. I work for you not like a slave, but doing for you is all I crave.

    If I tell you you’re destined for love.
    Would you look for me at every corner?
    If I said your heaven dropped
    here from above would you
    spread your wings for me?

    Words are how I can express what I feel.
    To you sweet lady thru dreams all things fulfilled.
    I am a June bug too.

    I believe is why I am smitten by you too.
    Serenade you into the midnight hour.
    Caress your back in a warm winter shower.
    In the rain up and down on the ground we lay.
    June bug lady of mine
    I’ll do it your way.

    Your more than special your one of a kind.
    Once in here you’re in there
    you have my body soul and mind.
    :flowers: :ilu:
     
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