Black Poetry : I Lied(I'm Done...It's Over pt.2)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Sep 19, 2003.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i think im just ramblin, but there's a point here somewhere.tell me if y'all r feelin this.



    They say if u love someone, set them free.if they come back to u, it was meant 2 b.
    Ya see, I had 2 use that mentality w/u.
    I could no longer have sleepless nites, wonderin if ur love was really true.
    I had 2 let u go, had 2 do it 4 me.
    I didnt talk 2 u, refused 2 think about u.
    Yea, i was really missin u.
    Then one day it hit me....
    My emotions came back in full force.
    Every feelin that i tried 2 ignore went right out my hearts door.
    My emotions said 2 me "Who r u foolin?....b patient, dont worry, u'll get through to him."
    Like Usher, I definitely got it bad.
    I'm w/someone, but i keep thinkin about somebody else.
    Yea, thats definitely me, w/out a doubt.
    We started talkin again, I 4got how much I like 2 hear ur voice.
    I got u 2 open up 2 me more.
    I couldnt believe what u were holdin in.
    But I know y u did, its cuz i have a man.
    I love u, wanna b w/u.even if its a couple of yrs down the road.
    If we're never 2gether, its all good.
    We should never let go, even until the day that we grow old.
    Always rememberin eachother and the memories we each hold.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow.....you poured it out there:heart::)
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you're right there is a point in here, but i can't put it into words LOL but i feel it and i know where you coming from. but yeah i can't put it into words. much love for this one.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    letting the river flow here speak on
    say it all ....wow! feelin dis
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..pour it all out...just flow on
     
  6. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx for all the love fam :). i dont have much time to respond nemore, but that doesnt mean that ur work is goin unoticed...all of y'all keep doin ur thing. much love :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise just come when u can and share .....
     
  8. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight read!!! Girl, deeply felt!
     
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    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    DIGIIINNNNN THIS , was good!
     
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    at da drop of a dime
    old feelings
    can change your mind...
    tyte scribe
    one love
    khasm
     
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