Black Poetry : i Learned Anatomy Anew, superhuman anatomy

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  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i reached for your hand
    And touched your heart
    i'm not a genius
    i was never overly smart
    And i've learned anatomy anew
    Just by being with you
    Yes, my hand touched your hand
    And our souls intertwined
    And two became one
    And so much more i did find
    i never was a genius
    Just sincere in my desires
    And i surely nerver suspected
    i posessed such intense fires
    In places i can't see or touch
    My imagination has exponentially expanded
    Because within your universe
    My wandering shuttle crash landed
    Neither hurt nor disabled
    It relaunched to perpetually sail
    Going where none had gone before
    Penetrating beyond the veil
    And anatomy i know now
    Like i had never known before
    Perfectly divine i would describe it
    As toward eternity i soar
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very sweet smooth well written scribe
    the beauty of this is awesome poet ..
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we never know how deeply we touch a heart, so well posed you poet of the week!
     
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    *chills up and down my spine*
    :blush: My brotha...superb poet of the week...:bowdown: a beautiful piece/peace :)
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH, Thanks for checking this out and shouting back......

    watzinaname, Thanks, yeah it's powerful and deeeeeeeep.........

    triniti, Thanks for the positive strokes......

    Love Yawl.....Peace :grouphug:
     
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