Black Poetry : I Know!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PropheticNsyght, Jul 25, 2004.

  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Put that ring on my finger?
    The sweetest honey to the darkest flower.
    The largest planet to the smallest atom.
    I know for sure that God is real.
    He had to be,
    because I’m standing in the same
    atmosphere with you and
    all of this is not by chance.

    You speak and my soul lies prostrate before
    you.
    When you look my way and whisper into
    my essence,
    you fill me with sunrises and sets;
    you thrive within my moments of existence;
    I know for sure that God is real.

    Special parings of our soul
    parallel twin rhymes and you slowly
    embody my rhythm.
    Under your practiced hand, I become your instrument.
    Is it alright if I’m interested in Me asphyxiating in You?
    Answer me in your own way; no words needed, just a
    prolonged glance and I swelter with fever.
    I know for sure that God is real.

    Time bows and the past cries tears of passion
    and restrained ebullience.
    ......Be
    .........still
    ....my
    .........heart;
    please don't put my business on front street!
    I'd rather wrap it up in a brown paper bag special
    and bury it beneath fantasy.
    I embrace my starship and slowly float through
    your constellation.
    Ice cold love and heated truth.
    I know for sure that God is real.

    I'm standing here inhaling your sweet
    drafts and your trade winds pick me up.
    So what’s the big deal?
    I'm in love...I'm diggin you, simply stated, deeply meant!
    Now I truly know for sure that God is real!!

    Copyright 2004
    PropheticNsyght
    "Poeta nascitur, non fit"
    "The Poet is born, not made"
    "Kasually Bohemian" Publishing
     
  2. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    God is love
    and if love is real
    God is Real..

    I felt/got that from your poem
    thanks..
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is an awesome script and I surely enjoyed reading this to the core.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done poet u scribe this to da max !
     
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    nice drop
    likes it
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    To be so taken with another soul, that it must prove that God exists...wow...this just touched my heart.
     
  7. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very, very interesting! I appreciate the love and compliments more than you know!
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your Majesty, I'm deeply touched ma. Be blessed.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich, you always make me feel so wonderful bruh. Much love my man.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coming from such a heavenly talent like you I'm totally flattered.