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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Drifting to a memory
    on the waves of
    yesterday into today
    as i reside in my own
    slumber, I knoweth of
    whome and why
    i seeth the reasons
    and learned my space
    now i watch awaiting
    the chapter to end ..
     
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    Within memories
    Lays all as yesterday
    Flows into today
    In my slumber I know
    As I see but fear to look
    The truth was told
    Inside a lieā€¦
    The chapter really
    never began
     
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    for some it's a myth
    but to others it's real
    evey verse, lyric and
    note run into a book
    from the corner stone
    of my beings a chapter
    set to close..............
     
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    from myth to reality
    lays a story untold
    from end to middle
    to middle into today
    from tomorrow
    forth comes the future
    a book in the making
     
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    i write inside my chamber
    where i cross lines of life
    and the humble souls to
    my memories as one close
    another one begins into a
    journey i may not be at the
    end but i know i was .......
     
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    $Rich$

    You know what? When you and MBA write together, it is like watching 2 people dance. Either of you lays the foundation, and the other comes and softens it, or turns up the flame. The way you started this piece reminded me of the Isley Bros. "Drifting on a memory,..." :roll:
     
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    chapters of memories
    make the book
    for in my humble spirit
    i set free my soul
    within the journey
    of time....
    which becomes my future
     
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    As one chapter closes, another one opens. Would we want to foresee own own future? And if we could, would we dare to change it? This piece bring with it, many questions to ponder.
     
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    indeed question lay un-answered
    tunes un-song yet it close
    Thankz for the words & visit sista...