Black Poetry : (i know you were here)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by theDynasty1979, Aug 18, 2003.

  1. theDynasty1979

    theDynasty1979 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know you were here
    because i heard you
    in other conversations
    in passing phrases
    i know because i saw you
    in flowers and rain
    watching me in moonlight
    embracing me with a breeze
    in unexpected places
    i felt you touch me
    hold my hand
    pull me back up again
    push me down when i'm wrong
    i know it was you.

    i know you are here
    when i lose my keys
    when they were just in my hand
    when something falls
    for no reason
    when i recieve gifts
    i dont deserve
    when i pray hard for things to go right
    and they go better
    when i want to cry
    but instead laugh
    when i talk to myself
    and get an answer
    when i need love
    when i need whatever

    see nobody can tell me angels don't exist
    i know you are here.

    thanks for keeping your promise...
    peace--Ms.Dy

    (copywrite 08/03)

    [I :heart: YOU, TICO]
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful
    the soothing
    feeling of
    knowing you
    are never alone
    I can feel the comfort
    in your flow
    wonderful
    Peace
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dy this was off the chain...meaningful to anyone whos lost someone...and that is everyone :)
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so beautiful!:)
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so incredibly touching, just gorgeous. MMM
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wonderful scribe u pose a master piece
     
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