Black Poetry : I know the reason it feels so strange

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know the reason it feels so strange

    No longer are we together

    Those moments we shared, how you and I first cared

    About each other was so wonderful

    To ever find, is a search done blind

    For a new relation that can reach that level

    But knowing I must

    Continue to trust

    That love might, for you and me

    One day bring us back together.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the one that got away...always keep us up at night.

    nice flow, HODEE.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    All in my head like twista.....the lost love of what was to a maybe re-unite seem so bleep
     
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    Bathing in the belief of the power of love, written so beautifully!

    Very nice Hodee!
     
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