Black Poetry : I Know How Sweet Love Can Be!

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Know How Sweet Love Can Be!
    With you it is not being given to me.
    The essence isn't coming thru you see.

    I want to give that other girl a chance with me.
    She promised like you did.
    To love me true.

    We started out good,
    what happened to you.

    Did I say something?
    Not perform a task?

    I don't curse you.
    Nor hit you.
    Why didn't the essence last?

    The neglect your showing.
    I'll put it in the past.
    If you show me how
    good your love can be.

    I can't just walk away.
    We are tied by wed.
    We have children their welfare.
    They must be clothed and fed.

    That couples dating, if we were
    it wouldn't change a thing.

    That circle, that glittering diamond.
    Loves not in a wedding ring.

    It's not just in how you
    satisfy me in bed.
    It comes down to, how
    you influence my head.

    Your bringing negative.
    Think I'm cruel.
    Your on me when
    I chastise the kids.

    Folks they tell us how
    well behaved they are.
    Maybe because of what I did.

    See baby. I don't want
    them to be lost in life.
    Thinking everything will
    come easy to them.
    Know there will be strife.
    The world makes you pay a price.

    All topics are open tell me.
    What do you need to say.
    Get it off your mind, into
    the open so we can continue this, love affair.

    I know how good love can be.
    I must have been on your mind.
    You called me this week
    at work, many times.

    If I'm not making you happy
    you deserve another life.
    With someone.
    You care for,
    that brings out
    your essence in this life.

    I say this because
    I deserve the things
    I wish for you.

    Your happiness.
    My happiness
    requires the essense
    to come thru.

    Lets talk.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I can't see how she would say no , this was filled wit essence.
     
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