Black Poetry : I Knew

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 19, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i knew from the beginnin her mission
    was to get in and take my position
    so u could open up and let her twist em
    so she could use u, take it, then quit it
    i knew she envied me
    i knew she was full of ****, she tried to empty me
    she pulled, pushed, basically tempted me
    to investigate, but u reassured and rested me
    i knew she wanted to taste it
    turn that sh** out like i blaze it
    did she have the skills like she claim-ded?
    or did she fail and come off that lame sh**?
    i knew she was a h**
    i could tell by her phrases and the stories she told
    i knew she was desperate and easy ya know
    u must like that slutty, sleezy stroke
    i knew she was close enuf to get it
    cuz u gave her the opporunity to check it
    yeah check it, test it, wet it, and wreck it
    but we both know she dont bless it like i carress it
    i knew she would split when it came down to it
    shes not that stay around 4 a minute chic
    not that lookin for love, settle down chic
    come on, u know she cant hold a crown to this
    i knew she wanted u to come 2 her
    and i surely knew u were gonna run to her
    cuz u were lookin to have fun with her
    but u didnt know u'd eventually cling n wonder
    i knew she was lookin to game u
    i knew exactly what she could say to u
    to make u make that move
    its not hard to cheat, but its hard to hide it and save it too
    i knew u were thinkin about tryin that
    baby come on, i can see even when i turn my back
    i warned u, but u fell deep and followed those tracks
    now u dont know where to go and how to react
    i knew she wwas gonna throw that **** in my face
    but im not trippin, ill put a h** in her place
    and i surely cant get mad if u let her blaze
    u obviously werent worth that much if u let her get a taste
    i knew that she was gonna change u
    show u that different lifestyle with that werent attained to
    then introduce u to that same crew
    that got some of it also, then exchange u
    i knew she would put some sh** inside ur mind
    bout me, my life, and how i spend my time
    at 1st u didnt think u'd pay attention and confide
    but u did, but i aint did sh**, i just stayed true and shined
    i knew she was devious
    she had it all planned out n u betta believe this
    she wasnt worried about u til she needed sh**
    i pointed it out, but u didnt see it
    the strong need power, while the weaklings need their weakness

    but u wanna know what i didnt know?
    that u were the same way and u were frontin.
    ****...






     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    woah! gurl I knew you wasn't gonna have that ****!
    you layed it down and spinned it out! tyte!
     
  3. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol enjoyed this flow!
    I see a possible
    Khasm/P.S. colabo...
    Peace to ya!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!! u blew his tail away
    what got me was i didn't know
    he was da same way ..................
     
  5. Khasm13

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    yo...i can't collab off of dat
    ps blazed that cat nasty like
    i dont have ish to say to dat
    other than this piece is tight as hell

    ratatat tat ---thats the sound of da gat
    that you just blazed that cat with

    peace
    khasm
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl, i was readin' this and smiling! i was like, ^5 lay it DOWN! whoa, this was sooo good...destee on fire today!
     
  7. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL. Thank you. Ill try to vent as much as i can.
     
  8. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    had an urge... lol

    ok, ok
    now what's her name
    and what's her game
    ain't that a shame
    more like a sham
    and kinda lame
    got us playin' blame games
    insane dames can't blaze flames
    next to my wiz
    kid...
    hope it's the last time
    like past times
    I'm asked
    I'ma tell you how it is

    inthefirstplace
    why you so quick to take this to
    some worst case
    scenario
    got me runnin'all up in some
    scary moe
    when we love in stereo
    but now you got me
    livin in her rhythm
    fingers poppin' toes tappin'
    butIknowit neva happened
    since way the heck back when
    before I ever met you
    so how I'ma let you get
    vexed off some ole crazy
    she said and shesaidagain
    sounds like some haters
    messin' wit' yo' headagain
    how you tryin' to play me
    you doin me
    like you an' me ain't got
    sumthin' real
    Oh don't front like you don't feel
    how we build on the daily
    crazy love with mad much appeal
    butI'mstilltrippin'
    how you get so insecure
    and believe that I would
    dip in the impure
    and straight gaffle sumthin' good
    c'mon now
    I'm hopin' you open your eyes
    and like see way through
    these gimmicks and games
    and lame thangs thay do
    I ain't even tryin' to play you
    now you got me thinkin' boo
    cause I sho' thought you knew

    Uh, life check..
    uh, one two, uh one two...
     
  9. Khasm13

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    you flipped dat skrybe
    no doubt...
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just piggy-backin off yall's idea.
    Peace!
     
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