Black Poetry : I KNEW U

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Sep 6, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i looked at u and
    at that moment
    i knew u
    it didn't matter that
    we had never spoken
    maybe u loved me
    in one of my past lives
    or lingered somewhere
    in my thoughts
    or was my craving
    at sometyme
    but
    i am certian that
    the
    heavenly chorus
    ......................................just............stopped...................................
    for u
    and when u walked
    toward me my heart
    skipped a beat
    because u were so
    ........wonderful........
    D.E.E.P
    in me and
    i loved...again

    loved untill love
    could not convey this LOVE...:eek:
    untill life was e.z
    as a spring
    breeze...

    and tyme freezed and it was only
    us.....:eek:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    story u letting the compassion out
    i love this piece it was warm and fuzzy
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol:$$rich$$ thanks bro, much love to u :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all smiles most welcome
     
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    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BLEW MY MIND!!

    I SWEAR!!!!
    you are the ish!
    we must be going through some common issues at this time
    CUZ I am FEEEEEELin this TOOOO much!
    (snaps)
    :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:
    GREAT!!
    EXCELLENT!!!
     
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    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that is soo sweet
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u yall, glad u liked it
    much love,
    -story
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is very nice. Love at first site. I know you have loved me for a life time kind of love.
     
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