Black Poetry : I knew it was love ...

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    midnight cass of love
    a mass of light dis night
    stars above me was
    graced in love unknown

    da moon beam
    cross da galaxy
    caressing da soft glow
    my body soak da eruption
    of glazed ova math

    I see into da journay
    of bliss and da migcal kiss
    from da sparkle of yo eye
    my heart beats like da drum
    of a nubian KING
    i feel da comfort u pose
    unto me i offer my white rose
    gently u give a small sway
    a final twist before u fade away

    massive love strike
    in a note
    my body dance in da
    romance of sounds
    i reach my hand for ya final beckon
    tenderly i felt ya touch
    if one last moment had been
    then my heart was your to keep
    that's when i knew
    how much i love u

    so i named u
    with the pen
    gave u life in mind
    and loved u
    honored u
    respected u
    now my arms r open to u
    for an embrance untouchable
    it was love i truely felt
    I LUV U
    :heart: :love: :heart:
     
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    mmmhmm! :wink:

    "so i named u
    with the pen
    gave u life in mind
    and loved u
    honored u
    respected u
    now my arms r open to u"

    that was my favorite part!! & i knew it was love
    as soon as i started reading this!! :) thank you
    for makin' me feel it this mornin'.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we reply without words to reply...this was beautiful Rich...Love is the most deepest part of a person and thank u for sharing that part with us!!

    lo'
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    elayne........when da pen flow da love grow and u will see
    the true love one so holds ......Thankz sis..

    mkhaya lo'........yes love is deep and we hold it so dear
    within our soul only to express it in wayz untouched
    Thankz sis....
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yep yep,
    yes yes,,,,
    you convinced us
    by the poam
    that it was love and still is

    just beautifull brotha!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yep! oh yessssss!
    da love one holds is da love to unfold before my very eyes
    and see within da heart deep into da soul yes love is it !
    Thankz a million 4 da read and u know how ya words hit me...
     
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    NOW HOW MANY REALLY KNOW WHEN TRUE LOVE COMES !?
     
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    Shani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Say it again, poet because the word flow is indeed RICH...

    beautiful thoughts...

    ~Shani:)
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i'm hearing you on this here poet


    DSS
     
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    Thanks Shani u know true love is what our hearts hold


    so'ja .....Man thanks 4 feeling dis vibe
     
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