Black Poetry : I keep him awake!

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  1. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I strive to keep him awake,
    keep him from falling a sleep
    in easy times, in difficult times
    I am trying to get him out of the dream
    so he can walk into reality, fulfill his dream and his destiny

    I keep him awake, whenever
    he threatens to give his last breath,
    lay down the fight

    I hold him awake, convert him
    to
    OPEN
    His eyes, to stay awake
    get his focus on me
    a powerful mirror of love.
    So it will be his image he sees in me
    the moment he awakes,


    …my name,

    Justitia.
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's right on point... love the one you're with.
     
  3. ladyafrika

    ladyafrika Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEAUTIFUL,BEAUTIFUL
    Nice point...
    gotta make sure you have people around
    you to "keep him awake"
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice...something very spiritual about this too, keeping someone in touch enough with their own essence to stay awake. Enjoyed the vibe poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    smoothly laid out to an awaken call
    flow head Moham
     
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