Black Poetry : I just want to tell you.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Feb 19, 2008.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words, my words filled with verbs and action

    Your love is action packed

    to be exact

    To wake up beside you is a blessing

    To be able to be at your beckoning call

    Your my light and my hope

    Baby the way you call my name sometimes send chills thru

    my spine

    Your touch I can't even describe

    I'm moist like Duncan Hines once it is over

    I can't help but to be nasty like Janet Jackson

    with you and only you

    You feel me more ways than one

    You are my sun

    The moon, the stars, the keys, the bars

    to the piano

    Let's continue to listen to John Legend as he plays out

    "Ordinary People"

    We love like Bobby and Whitney, but don't want to end up like them

    We can't live without each other

    Loving one another UNTIL THE END OF TIME

    and I even hope that in afterlife you will be waiting on me

    I love you baby, you can be my Valentine everyday

    These nine months have been about sacrifice, hardships, and disappointments

    Even tho' we have fought we still managed to hold on

    Because we know God is on his way

    We prayed you and me

    We

    Kept moving on pressing on

    Till God said the storm is over

    and we have each other to lean upon

    He made us strong so that we can raise our children in the right way

    God is good and he is able my love

    We both will continue to step out on faith

    for as long as God allows us to

    Breathe together

    Love together

    Forever

    You and me

    We

    Continuing to be what God has intended us to be..

    Thank you Jehovah for the love you have bestowed upon me

    I have you see real love and I am going to do what it takes

    to keep it

    I love you more each day as the days get longer

    I pray we continue to remain stronger

    as I am to be your wife

    I know I don't give you the respect that I should but forgive me

    You know I don't mean it

    Please believe these written words as I

    Just wanted to tell you..........



    Copyright 2008

    Lavette112/Nevar112​
     
  2. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow Nevar! Your impending nuptials has your flow on FIYA! Another great piece my sistah!
     
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    Read so genuinely, like a flow from the heart poetess.
     
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    marriage is a beautiful thing when entered soberly. If it makes you write and think down this road ah well .... so much more reason to do it. I like this peace it gave a performance feel that made the reader flow with the words, even adopting the moment to ride the waves of had to go there.

    commanding

    Patrice
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you ladies for giving me love on this write.......
     
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    Hi sister nevar
    Wonderful flow from the heart
    it is indeed a deep blessing
    to feel this excited floral
    in your poem sis..much love
    this is a wonderful read

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesomely done sis wow!!!!!
     
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    Awww, this is real nice! I'm so happy for you! Happy to see you happy nevar!

    Desert Storm
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    man

    i ain't mad at cha poet

    i'm happy for you

    all the best poet

    ALL THE BEST
     
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    thanks to each of you poet that have showed me love.........
     
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