Black Poetry : I Just Want To Be Real With You

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  1. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Today I speak to you.
    Nothing out of The Blue

    But Today
    I Just was to be real with you

    Everyday...We walk
    We walk in insecurity and....passion.

    Everyday we walk...we show strength
    Everyday we hurt inside

    I love you, so
    I just want to be real with you

    Each time we connect.
    One of us has to recognize

    Each one of us has somethng to hide
    A secret inside

    And only with eachother
    Can we be real

    When i speak to you...
    I get what others will not give

    I get a response from myself
    That tells me to live.

    But today I ned to say
    We are backtracking

    It is time to NOT stand Still
    It is time to MOVE

    I am tired of this same ol sadness
    And I know you are too

    So as we make changes on the out and inside
    We need to make changes deep down too.

    I Love You
    So this is my love being real with you.


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    I just want to be real with you.

    I am not in the greatest condition.

    That's clear.

    and never would i say that that is due to you

    or insiuate that I should be angry with you.

    I am ignorant.

    And I miss you

    Even when you are there

    I miss you

    I am just trying to be real with you

    In respect that....Everything you have done

    Has been real to me.

    It's been so Real

    And everything that goes on inside

    Sometimes it malkes me feel

    Alienated

    for lack of a better word.

    To Bless your name.

    Is to show my love for you

    And What I get

    The way i get

    Make me to believe I am....ungrateful.

    So many times, So many times, So many times.

    I am thankful.

    I fell worthless sometimes.....

    And I just do not know why.

    Who am I, to continue to have love for you?

    While I walk this earth.....

    I will continue to look to you....

    Those who look at me I am afraid.

    I look at me and can not understand what's going on

    I don't know what's going on.

    All I can do is listen to the sounds

    And Even my sounds are Beauty to me

    Is it real?

    Or is even my presence staged the whole way through.?

    I got a call as you know

    What am I supposed to do?

    What are WE supposed to do?

    As much as I would like to act...

    Or try and "stick it out"

    I am not sure where to go

    Or what to do

    I am just being real with you

    Love is strong

    But where does it rest?

    I'd like to know

    The last thing I am going to let happen

    Is them going through the things I do.

    "As smart as i am"

    I need you to tell me what to do.

     
  2. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful.
     
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    I need to real with you too...when I say this is awesome
    Great piece poet!!
     
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    With this piece I felt you were being real with the Creator, relating what you truly experience. The genuine feel to this scribe was striking.
     
  5. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bless My Brother and Sisters...I appreciate this Love as you Must already know:) Awesome????? Well :10900:
    It indeed was real Sister Watz.
    I appreciate that:) Stay Blessed Family!!!!:D
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you can't put it ANYmore simple

    you laid it down it PLAIN ENGLISH

    feeling you
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Brother So'Ja I appreciate you Bro:)
     
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    Wow Sis Plat! WOW!!!!

    You know I can read your mind so just be strong Sis! Times like these when we don't know what to do, where to go or how to handle it....Just BE STILL!!!

    For you already know that the answer to the end has already been worked out for you! Don't fret, cry or worry!

    Continue to walk the walk and be as beautiful as you are and see how things work out...because they will!
     
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    PLAT:
    And that you did...
    Kept it oh so real. I really enjoyed reading this.


    Much Luv
     
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