Black Poetry : I just happen to love you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Apr 18, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2001
    Messages:
    2,627
    Likes Received:
    31
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +32
    do I need to repent for loving
    you? telling you got me convicted
    in a land of verbal damnation

    you said you didn't want that weight
    to bear wear the bow of my love in your hair
    said you didn't want to feel obligated
    to tell me the same be inundated with
    falsehooded thoughts of lover's lane
    and walk bare footed cloaked in shame
    of loving me because I am something
    so different than other / past /behind you
    loves...

    maybe my words don't fit you
    maybe I'm trying to squeeze you into
    a garment you don't know how to wear
    maybe I need to wear how you make me feel
    so you can see how to walk down the
    runway of this slice of life called us
    maybe my words are not supposed to fit you
    maybe I'm so far ahead of myself that
    from a distance I think I see love
    but, it's inside of me so dis-stance
    is not the platform I stand on for
    it is my soul that echos your name.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 1, 2001
    Messages:
    2,093
    Likes Received:
    7
    Ratings:
    +7
    (Peep)

    that was really tight with vocab and flow loving this content awesome keep repping
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2001
    Messages:
    2,627
    Likes Received:
    31
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +32
    Thanks yo' 'preciate the comp. you keep doing what you do.

    one, blak
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 14, 2001
    Messages:
    2,616
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    Lover of Words
    Location:
    The PeAcH State
    Ratings:
    +4
    VERBBBBB!!!!!.....

    you make me sick!! :)

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Even though ya' know I don't eat pie...

    I'd eat a piece of this one hea....
    cause it looks real good
    from where I am sitting!!
    Tyght piece o' pie - Blakman~~!!
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 17, 2001
    Messages:
    3,955
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    Director, Community Employment Strategies
    Location:
    Minneapolis, MN
    Ratings:
    +1
    Vengence is mine, saith the Lord....

    but this piece hea -- needs MY response...!
    Just keep you're eyez on me.....
    ......I'm comin' for ya' ---flowin' heavily!!

    :heart: :lovestruc:
     
  7. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 2, 2001
    Messages:
    1,303
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    motherhood
    Location:
    maryland
    Ratings:
    +4
    i think that i'm only allowed one-word responses because your flows bring forth exclamation points in my being...
    WOW!
    ****!
    WHAT?!
    deep baby...
    thank you for this flow
    -7
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2001
    Messages:
    2,627
    Likes Received:
    31
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +32
    N2,

    I know that the "bow" reference was corny but hey I'm entitled to one or two flubs. Oh yeah, thanks for the words.

    W7,

    thank you sister....we still have that book to do.

    one love,blak
     
  9. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    1,154
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    African Dance Instructor/Cultural Educator
    Location:
    Buffalo
    Ratings:
    +0
    just lovin

    this tight flow!!:)
     
  10. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 24, 2002
    Messages:
    365
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    journalism student
    Location:
    QLD, Australia
    Ratings:
    +0
    lovin this flow. Speshly the lines:
    so you can see how to walk down the
    runway of this slice of life called us

    Very nice.

    *Emma*
     
Loading...