Black Poetry : I just felt like writing something silly

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cuvriefloesta, Dec 23, 2003.

  1. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Conditions of A lost Cinderella


    They call me Cinderella
    but they don't tell me why
    My shoes are made of rubber
    and my godmother don't fly

    My prince ain't nothing charming
    ok, my step-mother ain't nothing nice
    and it's too bad I have rats
    I may have enjoyed the mice

    I don't have my own cupboard
    Me and my six sisters share a room
    and the king of my castle
    sleeps in the living room

    I clicked my shoes three times
    but all I got was mud
    I couldn't catch a frog to kiss it
    so I gave a snake a hug

    my mamma drives the carriage
    but it lost it's royal wheel
    And my dishes don't sing and dance
    but I do chores for real

    I put beans under my pillow
    but my brother ate them quick
    and he threw up on my gown
    when them beans got him real sick

    They call me Cinderella
    but they don't tell me why
    next time they call me that
    I'll punch em in the eye.
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm diggin' it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a display ya pen in motion
    dis was tyte drop flow on
     
  4. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's da most talented jez being Silly I've ever read....

    Keep FeeliN what ever' ya wanna Feel...

    Write On!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    silly or not
    it was a tight drop....
    i likes this....
     
  6. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks everybody!!!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is soooo cute!!!! and I agree with the rest of the fam - if this is what comes off the toppa yo head, well good lawd then, talented young lady, keep flowin
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked this, the rhythm was on, the scribe was tyte...very nice.
     
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