Black Poetry : I just felt like flowing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by conflict, Jul 1, 2009.

  1. conflict

    conflict Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    drivin in the car goin from P.A. to V.A.
    inspiration hit so i pulled over on the freeway
    no type of epiphany or world changin thought
    inspiration told me to kick a rhyme for sport
    this flow is about nothin hope u dont expect much
    wouldnt even care if u read it and said "yo this sucks"
    cause the true essence of a flow is in the heart of the writer
    i put my pen to the paper wit the eye of the tiger
    my lyrics are fire. even if im the only one feeling it.
    good.... i aint gotta worry bout another brother stealing it.
    i flow for me and myself. who do you flow for?
    ima flow until god tell me dont flow no more
    or until my flowbone sore. stop me im an animal.
    eating mc's on the mic i am a cannibal
    lyrically im the way and the truth and the life
    if you not dion it like me then you aint doin it right.
    im startin to get hype. wit every other line that i write
    i be tryin to fight the feeling with the height of my might
    dont you wish this was an mp3 so you could hit replay
    but let me get back on the freeway headed to V.A.
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Loved it! "Flowbone" was hilarious!



    ROFLMBO! Okay! Won't be mad at all!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's the best thing about the flow,
    you can do it, as you go.
    Your flow is in the eyes of just YOU,
    to flow, or rhyme ...or anything you like to do.

    Great piece poet.
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats my favorite line
    i think just about every writer of any type feels this way once in a while
    great write
    :em2300:
     
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    Alright now, keep on flowin poet, coz you pennin verbiage like fiyah.

    I like this here, a confident poet! You gotta be able to acknowledge your
    own work, coz sometimes...nobody else will! Diggin it, Conflict.

    epiphany:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The reader could tell how much you were feeling it cause each line added fuel to the next. Just doing you was a blast. Lovin this.
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow on poet.. this flow is tight.
     
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    No doubt, that flowbone line was hot.

    I heard some Sean Price or something up in there, that cannibal bit - flow on fam.

    One.

    - Ikoro
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow right on let it drip drip drip
     
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