Black Haiku : I JUST CAN'T

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Can't understand it
    i know it should be but
    well i can't do it see

    not this time baby
    if i do where will we go
    who so happy now

    I just can't do it
    because my soul say no no
    heart say i love u
     
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    I just can't do it
    but my heart says yes yes
    I want to submit

    no matter the way
    my love is true for you too
    but I can't do it

    within the dreams
    my soul hears you but should I
    sumbit unto you
     
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    submitting within
    confession made da heart knows
    but can it happen

    loyality ot love
    so strong yet weaken by guess
    i just can't do it

    Now where do i go
    is it tyme or has my love
    been tarnish on myth
     
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    your heart pulls me
    but I seem stuck on what if
    can we should we well

    it's strong I feel it
    just don't know if it is real
    so I pray and pray

    now I watch for if
    it is His will it will come
    so I dont know yet.....
     
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    nobody knows yet
    lifting i could but can i
    stay above water

    I just can't do it
    my spirit pulling inward
    my eyes saying yes

    my heart lone to it
    soulfully i want too bad
    i can't or can i
     
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    Only time can say
    For if it is in His will
    let him lead you

    I dont know can't say
    He is never wrong,just pray
    within it shall come

    for all you have to
    do is ask of your desire
    for it is written
     
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    mystical moments
    my heart flooded unto warmth
    yet i can move see

    the abyss of it
    has taken me under for
    the long ride within

    i can't fine way ,help
    or is this just illusion
    i wanna know now
     
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    This was beautiful. I loved it. Much love.
     
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    thank u for the visit
    haiku's expressed sweet
    and short to perfection

    happy you enjoyed it browneyed girly .......
     
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