Black Poetry : I just can't take it

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by I-khan, Jan 22, 2006.

  1. I-khan

    I-khan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We need to be alone
    away from the world
    in our own imagination
    not ruled by money
    not ruled by greed
    but by ones own need

    We need to be awaken
    from this modern spiritual deprivation
    taken by conquerers
    and their religion
    enforced on us
    but not by our decision

    We need to be shook
    like the wars do books
    minus the lies
    and all the lives they took
    only to save their political look.

    We need to be taught
    about independent thought
    and not the kind bought
    inside schools that got caught
    by the Leviathans control.

    We need to unite
    and stop with the fight
    against out own kin
    unless they betray us
    than we will take their skin.

    We need to be carefull
    who we give power to
    in order to protect us from
    the capitalist migration
    towards self destruction.

    We need a new spearhead
    that leads but also follows
    into the dark hollows
    of life and death

    We need to stop following
    people like they are deities
    since some of our ancestors
    were sold by their "leaders"
    to feed the greed
    of the man from the ice mountains.

    We need to be wary
    of the weapons they carry
    since divide and conquer
    were used on the same "leaders"
    who fought each other
    though they looked like brothers
    while the man from the ice mountains
    encouraged it.

    We need to prepare
    since our rule is aware
    of its time of frutition
    in the coming years
    not very long
    only near to the strong
    like a good song.
     
  2. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop poet!:sand:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sing it loud and clear
    get away just u two
    from the world ..........

    I really dug this joint !
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed this flow on yours keep doing whatcha do boo!!!!!!!
    flow on flow on l-khan!!!!1
    :kiss1:
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dam your peen is smoking
    With this message from the mind
    This was a touch of realism
    Yes we need too all of the above
     
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    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow poet....im feeling this and we as people need to do a lot of things..
     
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