Black Poetry : I (I am)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Flyy baby luv, Nov 10, 2004.

  1. Flyy baby luv

    Flyy baby luv Member MEMBER

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    I am an out going person who worrys too much
    I wondre what my future holds in store for me
    I hear I will be prosperous if I believe and achieve
    I see mt past and what I went through
    I wish I could erase the things I wish weren't true
    I am an Ot going person who worrys too much

    I pretend to be the person people want me to be
    I feel thats not true & be me & who are yoou
    I touch my family, love ones, and "admirers"
    I worry that my life will not exceed and meet up to the expectations GOD
    has put in front of me
    I cry when I'm alone and when my mother hurts
    I am an out going person whho worrys to much

    I undrestand that I won't live to see always
    I say what I feel
    I dream hhurt, pain, love, GOD, and life
    I try to improve myself and like others
    I hope that I'll Gain fortune and fame through my self and spiritual growth through God and grow in him and love even my "admirers"
    I am an outgoing person who worrys too much
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :pc: very nice piece
    keep em coming
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice scribe
    thanks for sharing a part of you with us
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya flow here nicely done
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes the mind can run a little too fast and we need to catch up. I know what you're saying. Just do you, enjoyed the flow.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this piece
    The honesty of it is extremely touching
    and beautiful
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece really touches my heart. I'm outgoing and worry too much too. I love that you are so real in your poetry.
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An extrovert with
    the melancholic heart
    of an introvert...

    Nice work poet!
    Sage