Black Poetry : i hve been...

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  1. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    haiku


    i lasso the tongues
    of blue autumns dancin’ with
    summers of red ‘no’s’





    i have been
    the metaphor for
    the repressed and diseased…
    there has been u then there
    has been me.
    there is nothing remotely
    beautiful about ‘we’
    we
    have lost our glitter
    we have become
    old and ancient
    palaces on the bosphorous
    where sultans cooled their
    fingertips and jihad warriors
    fanned fanaticism.

    when will u
    embrace me? when
    will u be the windless invader
    disrupting my stars and
    rebuilding my cosmos…
    we
    used to trail our fingers
    thru wet earth…forming and shaping
    new destinies and tomorrows that
    gazed at us hungrily…
    mouths full of orgiastic smiles
    and they would eat us…and we would
    fall headlong into tomorrow’s bereft
    of mediocrity, but indwelt by something…unspeakable.

    i am now and have
    been metaphors for
    repression, and languish…
    its alright…I’m able to swallow hardened
    sunlight and mix and mingle it with moon
    dew that coats my soul
    and creates its own weirdly beautiful
    sonatas.




    ©2008 AgAbus





     
  2. soulosophy

    soulosophy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown: Thank you for sharing this deeply beautiful and touching piece. Perfectly flawless, refined, vibrating with a supreme energy of it own. No doubt I will come back 2 re-read...

    Peace, Love, Light
    :hearts4:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was tyte ya pen packin power , love da flow
     
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    ...and that is why despite the presence of that shadow instead of a sun ray, you can pen a piece in which the words almost leap off the page. Just beautiful.
     
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    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SOUL
    RICH
    WATZ....

    I appreciate you beautiful and seasoned poets for the love and support...you never fail to bless me. I'm humbled.
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We are in calling
    of Black Power
    We are Manning the Oars
    of the Road
    of masters
    of mankind
    in destination
    of our times
    of grasping lines
    of life
    of passing glory and above
    of earth and bloods shed
    of tear and the constant bed
    of life's journey
    of freedom
    of comming glory
    of save-age
    of us

    I was consistantly loving this flow Brother...Flow On:D
     
  7. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much
    mami! Thank you so much.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Power

    brings power

    from the core

    as expressed

    in a godly like metaphor

    peace
     
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    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sup Sol'ja...preciate you man! More than you know.
     
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