Black Poetry : I hope its not you

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i heard some commotion the other day...
    about some one playing a game ..
    i just looked away..
    because it wasnt youre name..
    i just turned my head..
    i just hope i,m not one of them..

    i hope its not you
    i hope it not you...


    Have i been a fool than for to long ?
    will it be......."to what was i holding on""
    is there coming to end and wich i thought
    was not just a beautifull song...
    those nice guys that i let past me by..
    because i always had a strong feeling ..
    that you were the one worthy that i would have to
    give a try...
    my eyes cry..
    not a certain kind of loyalty..
    no sumthing kind of souldeep..


    i just hope its not you..
    i,m getting some strong feelings...


    maybe you study,d on me..
    see me talking with guys in the street..
    They have maybe moved me...
    But does it goes deep...?

    hear my heart speak..

    What do you know about me...
    What do you know about my feelings..
    What do you know about what i feel for you

    What do you know about me..?
    what do i know about you...?
    i would let you in my life ...
    would you let my..

    just give it a try...

    What do you know about me feelings deep inside?


    sumthimes i get clauserfobic..
    is it only through the songs you speak..

    Somethimes you gave me a feeling i have to walk away..
    and when i do i have the feeling you curse that day...
    what do you know about my feelings ...
    what do you know about this feeling i have uncertainty
    have you ever thought that it is maybe killing me...


    uncertainty is the worst feeling you can have...


    after all i just wanted an honest conversation with you..
    just a chat one one about the present and the past...


    but maybe i just got it wrong ...

    i hope it not you..
    i hope it not you...


    by the way i will tell you

    this ...

    One on One..


    Cause if it is you it cant go on.....



    its not love yo....


    its not love.....
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Playing with someone's feelings is surely not love for the other person. Perhaps this person is just in love with himself. I liked the way you posed this piece about uncertainty.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da game dat's played on hearts always seem to scar
    yet broken to be mend i tell these love's of dear friendz
    tyte drop here and well felt
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    LibertyLady...

    This piece is very nice.

    Your expression of how you felt...how he made you feel...was done very well.

    :thanks: for sharing a special part of you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Playing with ones feelings can get you there
    nice write lady
    thanks for sharing....Angel
     
  6. angelicsage

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    heartfelt peace...
    much luv to you sister :spinstar:
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah....thanks fam:heart:




    mmm....



    arrggggg i,m like ...what is on my head...


    i,m like How How ....do people see me....
    I mean i have learn now to only trust god put youre trust in god...
    but i mean i have to live with people so i have to trust them to...in away..
    it is getting damaged more day by day...
    cause i dont shut people out of my life...
    i keep letting them in....




    what is on my head ""MISS FORGIVE"' so we can just run over her
    break her play games ......


    she will forgive....


    and i hope this person in not two in one......
    that would make it more sad.....
    cause i,m reading stuff here....

    but that i will leave for god to....






    I,m hurt man...




    Oh yeah i forgot ....

    eveyone is hurt or can be hurt...


    but that doesnt mean you go around hurting other people...





    pffff

    Sight...





    shaking my head here ...
     
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