Black Poetry : I Hope I'm Sleeping

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  1. silentsiren

    silentsiren Member MEMBER

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    This is like a bad dream,
    I hope I’m sleeping , I hope I’m sleeping
    Every time I put my heart into something it gets weakened.
    I hope I wake up soon and the sun is shining bright,
    Let a new day come I need some Joy in my life.
    I have fought hard but my spirit still is conquered.
    Living in this world continues to get harder and harder.

    This is like a bad dream
    Nothing is like it seems.
    I hope I’m sleeping ,
    I hope I’m sleeping.

    Lord comfort me I need a hug.
    For you’re the only one who shows me love.
    Come down from heaven and whisper in my ear.
    Tell me dear lord to “have no fear”

    This is like a nightmare.
    The world should have a sign that says “BEWARE”
    I hope I’m sleeping, I hope I’m sleeping.

    Wake me up this dream is not for me,
    But, I’m already awake this is reality.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed welcome welcome

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome upon the family stop in and visit our chat too
    at www,********/chat this was on point welcome :huh: :new:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life can be so terrifying that we wish we were dreaming--I think we all have had that feeling. You expressed it so well, welcome!
     
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    thanks

    Thanks so much watzinaname , for the reply and the welcome.I really appreciate it.
     
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    thanks

    thanks for welcoming me.
     
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    :wave:
    welcome to destee...
    i enjoyed your flow
    i was feelin ya...
    hope you share more
    and welcome again...
     
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    silentsiren Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    Thanks for reading i'm glad you enjoyed it.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey:wave:Welcome to the family
    of love and embrace
    this is a wonderful flow
    feeling that reality vibe
    for real
    looking forward to reading more
    Peace
     
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    silentsiren Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    Thanks Bluewater .
     
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    indeed flow as love given as u love in return
    welcome
     
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