Black Poetry : I heard you singing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mistaliberator, Apr 4, 2004.

  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dizzy off a newport )
    please
    forgive me)


    TODAY I HEARD YOU SINGING
    AND I WANTED TO SING BACK
    BUT IT WAS ONLY IN MEMORY
    AND I COULDNT BRING YOU BACK

    TODAY YOU VISITED ME IN
    WORDS
    IN PRAYER
    BUT MOST OF ALL
    IN THOUGHTS
    I CANT QUITE EXPLAIN THIS EXPLOSION THATS IN SIDE
    SO I WRITE
    EXACTLY
    WHATS IN ON MY MIND
    TODAY I HEARD YOU CALLING FOR
    ME
    BUT FOR THE FIRST TIME
    JUST LIKE THE LAST TIME
    I COULDNT
    CALL BACK
    SO I FALL BACK
    INTO EXISTENCE
    AND CRADLE THESE THOUGHTS
    THESE THOUGHTS OF YOU
    THESE THOUGHTS FOR YOU
    THESE THOUGHTS BY YOU
    THESE THOUGHTS OF YOU

    TODAY I SAW YOU LOOKING FOR ME
    BUT I DIDNT LOOK BACK
    IF I
    ONLY
    COULD RELIZE
    WAHT I WAS LOOKING AT
    I
    WOULD
    FEEL MUCH BETTER
    I WOULD FEEL
    SO
    AT
    EASE WITH THIS
    I WOLUD FEEL CALM ABOUT YOU
    ONLY IF I COULD LOOK BACK


    TODAY I HEARD YOU SINGING
     
  2. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very very nice.
    But you already know that
    I think your great so I am
    not saying anything else. :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very tyte drop this was str8 awesome
    u on a masterful roll today
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was
    very nice and
    easy to read
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mister

    Another nice drop.....simply diggin your style all the while :wink:
    Nita
    :heart:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice drop
    cause you spoke of them Newport
    keep the flow flowing
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  7. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your flowing abilities really shine!
    Your poems have a way of dragging someone into how U feel
    I tell you what...
    Trade you a black 'n' mild for a Newport :lol:
    Keep flowin' 'lil bruh

    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  8. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :lol: smh @ twision
    Word
    Brotha Mista
    may your pen bring ya mind the peace that it seeks...:grouphug:
     
  9. yahsistah

    yahsistah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice

    Hey Mista,
    Well I like the new flows as well as the old they is mad tyte. Like a song fa real it flowed like u was singin it.
    Shalom
     
  10. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    jus wanted to bring this one back to the top
     
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