Black Poetry : I Heard Her Call In Song

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Almost like a deafening yell, she called

    Wanting me to hear her clearly,
    truly, and magnificently

    I labored to hear only the notes to the
    words that would forever serenade my heart

    Until she called in sweet song…

    She sang the praises that rivaled any true
    lover's passion; she meant them all
    for me

    Angelic pieces that delighted my heart's
    ear and calmed my lonely soul

    Her call was sung in the key of love…

    Satisfied deeply by her personal melody,
    I cried; not tears of sorrow but those of
    blissful joy

    She soothed me with the karma-filled
    composition she composed; touching
    my mental exclusively

    She called out softly; in tune with my being…

    Our personal harmonies intertwined like
    blossoms clinging to vines; we became
    one created to love like there's no tomorrow

    Her aim was song from the beginning of our
    time together; singing to me in dreamlike
    verses that seduced my virtue and escalated
    her own

    Through a shared reciprocity of feelings proper,

    we smiled like lovers do as we made beautiful love

    musically…

    (C) GQInc 2001
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the meeting of the minds/hearts/bodies....

    such sweet harmony....sung in the key of love..

    K
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ,

    This has such a beautiful romantic flow. I loved it. Thanks for the very enjoyable read.

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    So who's the lucky lady who done "crooned" her way into your soul???

    Love this piece!!

    N2
     
  5. alyce

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    yes...

    simply, yes.

    a
     
  6. blakverb

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    GQ....

    ....smoove brother. I see you haven't lost a step at all, I guess I need to get in poetic shjape to keep up. Nice scribe blakman, keep 'em flowing.


    blak
     
  7. j'hiah

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    aight GQ, save some ladies for us would u?!?!

    this was smooth partna..

    nfinitely.
     
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