Black Poetry : I haven't been here in a while

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by jelli, Jun 19, 2002.

  1. jelli

    jelli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    These Words

    Flowing like a river with no end
    these words coming from my pen.
    The images and feelings of my mind
    flowing from head in rhyme.

    Taking me back to a place
    back to a thought I'd erased.
    Or moving me forward through the air,
    bringing feeling of hope or despair.

    Whatever the message that is conveyed
    at this particular time on this particular page.
    Be it happiness, dreams or thoughts of sadness
    Or maybe its just the simple gladness
    of being alive to see another day
    to see the beauty of the earth's display.

    These words are flowing with no end
    coming from my mind through my pen.

    Copyright ©2002
     
  2. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave:
    go head and flow .........
    Feeling the flow from your mind to your pen

    Natasha
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    real

    nice flow
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your mind and pen
    flow well together.
    I enjoyed the blend.

    BTW welcome home :)


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  5. misty

    misty Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice return ... Welcome
     
  6. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice...peaceful. I like the way your mind and pen work!
    Eternal
     
  7. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    very nice Jelli ... so glad to experience your flow again.

    Thank you.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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