Black Poetry : I Have Traveled

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jul 2, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your lips I want, your eyes I love.
    Your skin so sweet. I have been
    captured. I traveled daily thru
    the fog of life.
    When I saw you I realized I had been
    sleeping. This was not a chance encounter.
    When I looked upon your face I fell in love.
    Your long black hair, I long to touch.
    We spoke and shared ideas and
    dreams. Will you ever be mine? Am I
    to exist without your essence? I carry
    hope.

    (c) HODEE...
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The prime example that poetry is prose
    In another form. Well done.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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