Black Poetry : I Have spent a Lot of .....TIME

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have spent a lot of time
    Putting myself together.
    Getting ready for what I wanted in life.
    I had fun. Real fun.
    All the days of my life.

    I have achieved some things
    Beyond my dreams.
    I know God blesses me so

    I have before my eyes
    Another dream
    A splendid
    Venture
    I know

    Opportunity
    Abounds in my grasp

    So... what is wrong?
    I hold a long past!

    The pull
    Is real



    :bomb:
    Explode​
    :bomb:

    It’s the time
    Break chains

    You love the rain

    I perform better
    When there is snow!

    Both are wet
    I become my best

    When I can be cold
    Wet
    As I go.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HODEE.....sound like we one and the same......this piece rocked me cause it's me all
    in it..........awesome and on point
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life is strange.. we all are human
    Like minds.. that is the cool
    both twin signs.. one of a kind
    You my Gemini brother:1on1:
     
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