Black Poetry : I Have Never Seen this Day....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SwtT, Nov 13, 2003.

  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This morning when I woke from my slumber...
    This morning as I thanked God, I wondered.....

    About the day before me at hand
    that I had yet to know
    About the person who I am
    that has yet to grow

    I have never seen this day
    Never seen the beauty of these skies
    I awoke a child reborn
    ...at least in God's eyes

    I have seen a thousand suns
    Took a shower a million times
    Talked with my friends for a lifeline
    Written countless rhymes

    I take for granted at times
    that I am able to walk and to see
    So what if I have glasses?
    Some aren't as fortunate as me

    I have never seen this day
    I don't know what will take place
    Will something happen to me?
    ..thats all up to The Most Highest's grace

    I am forever grateful
    Blessed with the abilities that I have
    I may have had a few broken hearts
    But I won't stay forever sad

    I have never seen this day
    and you know what...neither have you
    Let us give our thanks
    for being able to strive through
    :fairy:

    I wrote this poem since I am in such a good mood. I got accepted to my back up school today so it put my heart in a good mood
     
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    this is beautiful
    it is nice to have another day
    to wake to a new morning
    nice flow
    Peace
     
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    flow on baby girl...
    today was a good day
    tommorrow a better day
    love ya...
    :angel1:
     
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    :bowdown: baby gurl i luv this one to the heart escpecially the second stanza
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Bluewater:heart: Congrat on your week!!!!

    Msblk :heart: I agree with you:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yessssssss
    i love this piece u drop a charm here
    beautiful
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Badu:heart:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: Rich:heart: I had to get myself back on track with some flows. I am glad you enjoyed it:D
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ola:):heart: Thank you so much for dropping me a line sista!:wave:
     
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    I have missed your flows, SwtT. This one is on. :)
     
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