Black Poetry : i have had it

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Nov 22, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i have had it
    enough of you
    i don't care how long we've been together
    i am full of hurt and anger and you are crazy and you don't listen to my side sometimes --
    cause you gotta be right
    and you can say such mean things
    and i was like, this is it
    i'm looking for an apartment
    and you're like, fine, take $5,000 and get settled and
    i'm like fine, and i'm crying and talking to realtors
    and we're both like, we've had it
    and i am still loving you while i'm looking at apartments
    and i hate apartments, i like our house
    but why you gotta act so crazy sometimes and make me so miserable
    why we gotta separate...why'd you hand me this $5,000?
    fine, i can do this...and i'm taking my weights--and-- the other computer-- and the bedroom set outta the extra bedroom and the boys need new bedroom furniture because--you're still their father and....they gotta visit
    why you make me so MAD!? I CAN'T DO THIS BY MYSELF I'M TIRED TOO, BUT YOU DON'T LISTEN!
    no this man did not just hand me $5,000 and--
    what about the tuition for the boys and you're like i'll pay that too
    and--
    i'm actually tryin' to make this easy on you
    and--
    why you callin' me on your cell phone every five minutes and now we've got uncomfortable silence
    i hate apartments
    and i'm home packing cause i'm leaving
    and you walk in the door
    and walk over to me and you say
    i'm sorry...don't ever leave me
    i would die without you
    and i cry cause i am in the safety of your arms and i can't imagine life without you
    even tho your *** is crazy and you don't listen and sometimes
    and...and...do we have to have this conversation?
    you say you love me
    i say i love you too
    and the phone keep ringing cause my sisters wanna kick your ***
    guess i'll call the dogs off
    we talk until the sun comes up
    we make love like love is goin' off the market
    and i have had it
    with thinking about leaving you
    ever again
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Break up to make up...

    First you love me then you hate me...

    Love can make your head spin.

    Man...
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my RED.................
    i hear ya this took me back down memory lane
    but i had it !!
    and i couldn't stay
    had to go my way
    so happy u stayed
    and it worked out
    dis was very well done and expressed beautifully
    wow!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...for a few thought i was readin a page out my book...took me way back
    i feel ya girl i feel ya...:angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad this had a happy ending, and the road is smooth. I don't wish a rocky road on anyone.
     
  6. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks...i'm still in a scary place, but i have to get it out in my writing...still wondering if i made the right decision to stay...it's real in the field...peace.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..indeed it start off rough
    and smooth in the end
    i do love happening ending
    much love sis
    Peace
     
  8. AfroBoricuaRoni

    AfroBoricuaRoni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is hot. i feel all your frustration and every emotion, this is wutz really good.

    Roni :heart: