Black Poetry : I Have Fallen

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We both had that intimidating
    glance; you know that look we get when
    we listen to our favorite love song while
    lying in bed just thinking about nothing
    but each other

    We felt those tingly feelings during our
    midmorning, midday, and midnight
    rendezvous’s over the telephone lines
    where we shared little nothings that,
    unbeknown to us,
    could perhaps, just perhaps,
    one day transform
    "this"
    into something meaningful

    Smiling coyly with one another, we played
    the part well of adolescents on a first date;
    laughing at our similar awkwardness
    and then just simply laughing about
    nothing at all…we were young once

    Let’s now mature into our adult souls…

    Can you envision me drawing a hot,
    steamy bubblebath on a rainy, damp
    evening complete with wine, candlelight,
    song, and just the two of us?

    Deep is my desire to have more than the
    evening wet…for I am a man; no longer
    a boy and you are certainly all woman;
    my craving is to be drenched in you and
    yes, saturated in us…

    Do you hear me telling you that
    you’re the prettiest persona of fine,
    sophisticated female bliss that warrants
    extraordinary kisses from me placed

    all

    over

    your sweet body?

    Do you feel me running my fingers
    through your silken hair closing my
    eyes as I savor this perfection?

    I too feel your want for me as you
    reciprocate what’s real with your
    gentle touch…something close to
    magical enchantment
    is
    what
    "this"
    is

    Mmm…I won’t give up this
    right
    feeling for anything in this world

    I wouldn’t want us to ever change the
    way we feel through the course of this
    mutual mental stimulation
    that’s grown with time

    And oh how I love how we’ve grown

    A beautiful sunrise, a romantic sunset
    entices belief in the promise that dreams
    do come true for a

    "meant to be" friendship

    a

    quiet serenity

    and an

    everlasting love

    I have fallen
    for you
    and
    I have fallen
    quite hard
    since first we met

    Funny thing about it is

    I don’t even mind…

    ©GQINC2K2​
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wellllllllllllll-ah!

    alyce
     
  3. Rashad

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    GQ!!

    You did your thang on this here man!! This is how u do it!!
    Tyte Piece Bruh!! Tyte!!:toast:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    This was all that!
    Very enjoyable read.


    Scribeaboutit!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BigHead.


    ...once again you have very effective-ly stolen
    the very breath from me... & i am complete-ly
    in awe of this piece. but then again... you just
    cain't help but get me that way!! :)

    :heart:
    MEB
     
  6. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like i said before tongue twister, stay clear of my woman...dude you make me mad cause I end up liking your love **** even when I'm trying to stay pent down on err'thang else...you got skills and definitely game -stay away now....
     
  7. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce - take a moment; wipe the drool!!! :lol: :kiss: Appreciate ya time in this read Queen!!!!

    Rashad - Thanks for lookin' in dawg!!! :toast:

    Coco - Glad ya thinks it was all that!!! Thanks for feelin' me with the eyes lady!!!! :kiss:

    BlakGurl - Now if ya stop callin' me Bighead, I'll certainly stop tryna steal ya very breath away... :lol: :kiss: Thanks to you as always for always responding to my ****...well most of it anyway... :wink:

    Bra-Man - Ya woman is safe dawg...I couldn't step to another poet's prize.... :lol: Thanks for the mad comps mos' def dawg!!!

    :heart: to the sweeties
    :peace: to the fellas
    GQ
     
  8. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fa' sho, G, fa' sho!!!!!
     
  9. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Still on top...

    This is absolutely LOVE-LY. I mean LOVE-LY, GQ. Some Sistah is most definitely blessed.

    Hmph. I have fallen for this peace.

    :toast::heart::toast:
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Appreciate it Queen Nia!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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