Black Poetry : I have been waiting so long

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have been waiting so long for her to be in my life.

    I saw her standing in a group of very close friends.
    Man she looked good. So I made my move.
    I asked her to take my hand.
    I pulled her in close to me it felt so right.
    I placed my arms around her waist
    Loving the hugging and the feeling wanting more, like a kiss.
    As I leaned in to kiss her, she pulled away.

    I asked her what the problem was. She explained she had a fear.
    Other relations still lingered and she was being cautious for sure.
    Yes a kiss can be intimate, more than relations I hear

    She told me she was afraid of being hurt.
    I assured her this time it will be different and worth.
    The adventure, journey the love.

    I can’t get her out of my head, not that it’s something I want.
    All day nothing else has been on my mind.
    Just that moment her.
    The way, the passion... the day I had.
    Can’t wait until tomorrow...will I see her again?
     
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    I like feels good just be able to read you again thanks....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Indeed great write HODEE
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where are you, today MzBlk... You are special and hold a special place. You reading me. I love that cause it's been a while for us all. I am so glad to come home and see my old friends. Much love to you sister! You are special MzBlkAngel
     
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    Hey Bro Hodee I been off for few but I am back now
     
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