Black Poetry : I have been patient

HODEE

Alonewolf
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My imagination​
Ideas come from deep within
Give them form
Give them attention

No more time
Never discouraged

ALWAYS REPRESENT

Hope you recognize

Release the magic
Let it flooow…..

Drop and stop lugging the traumas
They burden you down…..
They keep you from running

I have been patient

Waiting a longtime

To get to know you

Keep me balanced
Break off some of your time

Can’t be the main focus
Not 100%

But I will show you
All time well spent

You want me
Pick em up
Come and get me
Never too much

A good thing
Can’t grow old


For the ascent
To the level

To the heart
In the run

You the winner

Love ya long
Over and over
Grow this strong

Kissing things gently
Loving the touch
Two ordinary people
Love each other so much
 
this was good but speak in first person and come harder homey
http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57093

i hear ya.. rhymebad
I am in the first then it flows out.
I never stay within a given.. just me
boundary pusher


"I said, you said, or he/she said"

First ---> Second --> and Third person writing or speaking

The reminder and added advise is appreciated bro.

during a flow.. my perspective is theirs, mine and how others may be viewing
the dart thru each view is just an exercise I like.
 
yes, Hodee....I really enjoyed this. Something about it spoke....depth.

thoughtful write.



I want it all. I want the depths of a relationship untapped
Do they know me, how well do I know them
For in all Association, business deal, connection or rapport

How ever it turns out.. My all is in.

For the ascent
To the level
To the heart
In the run

Is mine

This flow started out just a note
I have a few ideas I need to dedicate more time to
Then it flowed to just a me and you.. one on one


Thank You sweet apple*pie
 

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