Black Poetry : I have been patient

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Nov 28, 2008.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My imagination​

    Ideas come from deep within
    Give them form
    Give them attention

    No more time
    Never discouraged

    ALWAYS REPRESENT

    Hope you recognize

    Release the magic
    Let it flooow…..

    Drop and stop lugging the traumas
    They burden you down…..
    They keep you from running

    I have been patient

    Waiting a longtime

    To get to know you

    Keep me balanced
    Break off some of your time

    Can’t be the main focus
    Not 100%

    But I will show you
    All time well spent

    You want me
    Pick em up
    Come and get me
    Never too much

    A good thing
    Can’t grow old


    For the ascent
    To the level

    To the heart
    In the run

    You the winner

    Love ya long
    Over and over
    Grow this strong

    Kissing things gently
    Loving the touch
    Two ordinary people
    Love each other so much
     
  2. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, Hodee....I really enjoyed this. Something about it spoke....depth.

    thoughtful write.
     
  3. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  4. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hear ya.. rhymebad
    I am in the first then it flows out.
    I never stay within a given.. just me
    boundary pusher


    "I said, you said, or he/she said"

    First ---> Second --> and Third person writing or speaking

    The reminder and added advise is appreciated bro.

    during a flow.. my perspective is theirs, mine and how others may be viewing
    the dart thru each view is just an exercise I like.
     
  5. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want it all. I want the depths of a relationship untapped
    Do they know me, how well do I know them
    For in all Association, business deal, connection or rapport

    How ever it turns out.. My all is in.

    For the ascent
    To the level
    To the heart
    In the run

    Is mine

    This flow started out just a note
    I have a few ideas I need to dedicate more time to
    Then it flowed to just a me and you.. one on one


    Thank You sweet apple*pie
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling you poet

    feeling the love man

    no it can't
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Hodee...

    :wave:
    Patience is a good thing, so it time well spent!
    I enjoy how you operate!

    And you handled that well!:)


    Be Blessed!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  8. Harry Hyman

    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee - This speaks to the longing in all of us, like a depth speaking to a height. Our imagination is limited only by our limitlessness. You did good Hodee. "A good thing can't grow old". I liked that indeed. Namyh
     
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    HODEE:
    Your piece is wonderfully beautiful.
    I enjoyed the read and can relate.
    You know what they say...Good things
    come to those who wait....
    I'm sure your good thing is coming.


    Much Luv
     
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    Hodee...

    I loved how you laid it down here...wonderful.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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