Black Poetry : I Have A Secret (4 someone named Bresha)

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everyday
    I think of you in every way
    even when i try to
    forget u, i cant i guess im just stuck like glue
    we've both done some changing
    without any type of explaining
    but i know that I met you for a reason
    even if we both changed with the seasons
    but im not complaining
    cuz you have made love worth trying
    even if it breaks ur heart or leaves u crying
    Id honestly go thru with it twice
    cuz we've paid our dues and the worth can't be priced
    sometimes I have the tendacy
    to think of u tremendously
    just wondering how ur doing
    until i wake up to the coffee reality's brewing
    then I go back to my life
    back to basketball n long nights with my ' wife'
    Its been awhile, but I know I'll never be able
    to walk away from all the promises we laid on the table
    not until I tell you what Ive been concealing
    cuz Ive told you many things reguarding my life n what Im feeling
    but Ive never told u my secret that Ive held pretty close...

    you were the best thing that ever happened to me cuz u opened the doors for growth.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK, first of all, this gets a thumbs up because it's tight. Second reason is cause it is mysterious, and you know how I like that. But most importantly, sis, you have taken the lesson without the grudge or the pain. Mad, mad props for that. This is bomb.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 off the hook tyte drop love dis
     
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    way to roll with it gurl...it takes a special kind of person to take the best of the worse and move on :)
     
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    A lesson well learned....

    well i guess i can say that i agree, but it was more that that 2 me. i didnt just learn to grow... i learn to love and not run from it. but i learned it the hard way... mostly thru my mistakes. but all in all it was a lesson well learned.
     
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    yes this is a wonderful poem...straight follow drop...nice one sis
    Peace
     
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    Some relationships help us to grow, I like the way you captured this in your poem.
     
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    this flow was very tight, honest and from the heart. i loved it. much love to you.
     
  9. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Yall

    peace n blessins...
     
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    GYRL, I like this. No I love this.
     
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