Black Poetry : I have a new child!

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She gave birth
    to love in the back
    alley of her mind
    ashamed said
    she had no intention
    of having a new something
    to nurture
    wasn't looking to get
    pregnant yet
    she continually opened
    her mind to me and
    I copulated with what
    she dreamed of.....
    she hid it from me for
    nine months plus two hours
    she told me under a rain
    shower.....the pattering
    of the drops dropped
    a bassline to her birthsong
    a heartbeat
    beneath her speak
    "I love you" she pronounced
    was my child I held it within my arms
    all three of us cried....I let
    it breastfeed on my chest to
    satisfy it's hunger on
    my emotional sustenance...
    She followed suit....
    our child grew and takes
    care of us now
    serving as the tie that binds
    us forever


    her love
    my child

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOW!!!!!

    HER LOVE YO CHILD
    TOGETHER WE CRIED
    MAN THIS HIT WIT A BANG!!:toast: CONGRADULATION
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Verb

    Your words are so deeply penetrating. Like acupuncture to my mental stimulating it into maximum overdrive. Great flow!

    MadLove:heart: Coco
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My RoYaL BLak-NeSs....


    you ain't nuthing... but the ****!! :)

    but you knew that already....
    (even though you'll say you didn't).

    OneLuv.
    Ga~
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now!

    This reaches deeply and affected me--an excellent flow and a touching subject--scribe on--Amun-Ra

    Where do you stand on abortion? Check out Amun-Ra's new column "Abortion--Both Sides Now" and state your opinion on this controversial subject at:

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  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man

    I bow before your greatness and then some. I agree with my sista Sunny as well as the rest of the family




    One
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey now...
    i don't know exactly what
    to say to praise this but
    i dig it dig it dig it...
    -7:spinstar:
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    deep

    deep deep

    deep deep


    Blakverb you are one poets who has my attention


    belated congrats!!!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful Blak

    this is the way love stays when it's real and true .... lovers just do everything they can to keep it new.

    Thank you for this.

    a
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To my fam...I've said this so many times before but it never gets old (not to me anyway)....I appreciate the comps and support from all ya'll...it keeps me going....

    blak
    verb

    (I have one coming for all ya'll)
     
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