Black Poetry : I have a "date""............

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I,m taking a shower....

    I dry my body...

    and rub it in with Oil..

    I sprinkle my body...

    with a flowersmell....

    I nailpolish my nails...

    hands and feet....

    I model my hair....

    I put a little make up on....

    not to much.....

    a Rose in my hair....

    is the final touch.....


    I have a "'date "' today...
    Its my first....
    and hopefully my last...
    my last....

    cause Today....

    I,m going to get Married.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yesssssssss!!!!
    the date to da alter
    a date of foreverness
    the last date at last

    this the date i lone for
    woooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
    flow on sis
     
  3. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes ,me to..........

    .........................

    thanks.. rich....i found some old poems........
    i thought why not post them....
    but this one was inspired for a friend of mine who got married..(its for the sisters who are getting married)
    but of course there is a vision of myself in it....
     
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    and this the beauty of it .............
    we do have a sistah here getting
    married soon ...
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes i think i saw her passing .she responded on one of my poems God bless her......I is wonderfulll !!!!(smiling here)
    aspeccialy ...when it is for life......
     
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    this was pretty tight i liked this
     
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    AWWWWW....Unexpected ending. I love it!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if only you knew the feelin' this poem gave me! i'm gettin' married soon and this was just wonderful... :)
     
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