Black Poetry : I Hate

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MissHoney, Feb 28, 2008.

  1. MissHoney

    MissHoney Active Member MEMBER

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    I hate the way you act, when I come around
    How suddenly your smile changes to a frown
    I hate the way you act like you really care
    I know when I’m near you don’t wanna be there
    I hate the way you talk a lot of **** from time to time
    How you think I got my place and you don’t want me out of line
    I hate the way your smile brightens up my day
    I hate the way you always know what to say
    I hate the way you talk, I hate the way you smell
    I hate the way you eat, and how I care that your well
    I hate the feeling I get within my body
    I have to think of you just to reach my ecstasy
    I hate the way I think I know how you feel
    I hate the way that my heart is stronger than my will
    I hate the way I’ve become a love slave
    I hate the fact of knowing that you don’t feel the same
    I hate the way I feel because of what you do
    I guess I really hate the fact that I love you:SuN008:
     
  2. Zulile

    Zulile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hate the way I feel my eyes light up, when they meet yours.
    I hate the way your casual glance causes my heart to soar
    I hate the way I hear only you in a crowded noisy room
    I hate the way I struggle to be aloof when I hear 'our' tune
    I hate the way my words come out to sharp, only to mask my pain
    I hate the way I hate myself, when I know there is no gain

    :(
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hate the the fact that your love for him super-ceeds your love for 'YOU
    I hate the fact, that much of your time was consumed...feeling 'HATE ...
    Nice piece poet....^5
     
  4. BallOfConfusion

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    Dear Lord, This was me not to long ago. Lol when I was reading this I'm wow, didn't I write something like this once. I'm never really good on the advise thing-but maybe you should take sometime for yourself, clear your head of his energy. Good write!!
     
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    Seems like a love gone wrong somehow, and now there is an anger in everything about him. I'm agreeing with BallOfConfusion, if this is indeed an actual situation, for we don't really know in poetry, time to give yourself some space. Feeling your angst.
     
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    Great message Miss Honey! I know exactly where you are in these words. I'm with BallofConfusion as well, I had to look back through my works cause I could have sworn I wrote something very similar. We get so caught up in "them" when we need to just focus on "us" and then the true happiness comes forth.

    Look at you Sis. Z...flowing! LOL
     
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    Hi Miss Honey
    Hate and Love have the same
    emotional level. They are just on different sides
    Very awesome way to release the things
    you see and feel. Because you really care
    Keep on inking.

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    lol

    so much hate it's actually love

    been there poet

    feeling you here
     
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