Black Poetry : I Hate Your Freakin' Guts Man

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  1. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Hate Your Freakin' Guts Man
    By Monad.poetress


    All those nights alone with the baby
    Being with you is driving me crazy
    I'm with someone yet I feel alone
    Yet I'm kinda relieved when you're not at home
    Cause you start arguments about any issue at hand
    I hate your freakin' guts man

    All your habits I just can't ignore
    The cigarettes you smoke and the way you snore
    The way your pants sag and the corny *** jokes
    Even your friends and your nosy *** folks
    I wish I could slap you with the back of my hand
    I hate your freakin' guts man

    Go away, yet I'll let you come back
    Break up to make up, its a well known fact
    I wanna help you move
    I wanna help you pack
    I wish you were away in a distant land
    I hate your freakin' guts man

    But seriously you know I love you boy! :luv:
    ~Mona
    You get on my nerves
    I hate when you're here
     
  2. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: You slammed him and gave him a hug at the same time! Look how versatile you are, poet!!! Loved this. I bet there are people all around the world who can relate. Much love.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    happy i'm on ya good side whewwwwwwwwwwwww!!
    bruh been hit wit a bomb !
     
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    just go head on
    flow it
    tight drop...
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol I love you but i hate but i love you wow LOL
    work it out sista lol :)
     
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    Feelings can be confusing like that, but hey, but like trinti said, you'll work it out. Keep your flows coming.
     
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    Reply to Monad.poetress

    Oh my ! You want him extinct, nonexistent, not pounding the pink?
    Can’t he see he’s not wanted? perhaps he needs Dr. Phil, the shrink?
    Be he stupid, be he lazy, I don’t think his main squeeze is crazy.
    I think untold story, what goes on hind closed doors, is roses and daisies

    Alpha Male liked your poem greatly
     
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    I can relate to this....lol....the love is that strong do you poet flow on:wink:
     
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    I'm confused here, do you want the :hammer: or the :heart: ? ...I can't really tell. :shades: ...this was nice, it made me smile on the end. thanks for this piece.
     
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    Whoa, this was mad tight. Diggin this one.
     
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