Black Poetry : I hate my mommie - The Mothers Day Massacre Collection

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  1. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hate my mommie


    I hate my mommie

    It is my goal and destiny
    Not to be with a woman like my mama
    She already provides enough stress
    Annoyance, Aggravation and Drama
    Always complaining
    Never satisfied

    I hate my mommie

    I never realized
    That I made traditional wisdom a lie
    They usually say the women you like
    Are like your mother
    I proved them wrong
    Because of my interest in others

    I hate my mommie

    I see why one of her ex's used to smoke crack
    I would smoke too
    If I had to deal with someone like you
    That is why I refuse to roll with women like my mommie
    Because they cause you to loose sleep and money

    I hate my mommie

    One day I decided to do something wise
    Amidst what others call folly and glee
    I decided to make a WHAT I WANT IN A WOMAN INVENTORY
    I started writing the usual things
    And of course this woman was not like my mommie

    I hate my mommie

    And you know she had to be fine too
    Suddenly during my transcription
    I had deja-vu
    I was like dang this person sound familiar
    I quickly looked at my female resume
    It seemed like all the women I rolled with in the past
    Acted this way

    I hate my mommie

    Before my eyes I saw a perfect picture
    It was profound and powerful
    Like when you find the right knowledge or scripture

    She was about 5'7 and weighed about 110
    She was everything I was writing about
    I suddenly dropped my pen

    This perfect woman was mommie
    The only empirical source of love I know
    It never occurred to me that all of the women I talked
    Had her traits and more

    I soon realized that for any woman to put up with me
    Because I know how annoying, aggravating and stank I can be
    She had to BE JUST LIKE MOMMIE

    And man to my surprise
    Some of the folks on my female resume
    Shared my mama slimness and dress size

    Shared her pains and her cries
    Even shared her pretty eyes
    So that’s the end of the female inventory I wrote
    I thought I was balling high with women who were from other mansions
    But I failed to realize I was still the snotty nose kid
    Who played inside her gate

    Like a wise man one said
    I guess we love those who we hate

    I hate my mommie
     
  2. PurpleMoons

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    Well! :lol: This was
    originally unique!
    Made me laugh
    and go Hmmm!
    Loved it!
    Tyte piece!
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :driveby: BOY!!!! :flamet: HOT! :jawdrop: you said so much in this,

    GREAT GREAT POEM!!THIS WAS THE IT!!!!!
     
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    Thanx Yall.
     
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    nice poem son...creative
    one love
    khasm
     
  6. Nita

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    lQQking

    Whew...the title almost kept me from peepin this out, but this turned out to be a very nice piece Manasiac......nice job brother.
    Nita :heart:
     
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    yo

    at the beginnin uh
    dis joint
    the description kinda
    reminded me of my ex

    tyte way you evolved
    the thought-poetry
    you mad wise bruh
    seekin insight is a value

    one love,
    /antar
     
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    Nice poem
    i was worried yep....
    about the title...
    creative nice one
     
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    as with the rest of your posts, this reflects your unique outlook on life. it's really great to have that around here. nice piece.
     
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    thanx for the love yall.
     
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