Black Poetry : I Hate My Baby Daddy

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  1. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Hate My Baby Daddy :grin:
    By Monad.poetress

    I Hate My Baby Daddy
    By Missmona


    I have never experienced love like I have with this man
    It feels as if he's placed his heart in the palm of my hands
    But the ***** is straight trifling
    Ooh he makes me hurl
    But for the past five years he has truly rocked my world
    I mean his kindness is unlimited
    His words ignite my heart
    But the ***** misspelled my name on my birthday card
    I know it was a mistake but I got him good that night
    And just with his kisses he made all the wrongs right
    I have never had a man to walk 4 miles for me
    To give me his heart and there was no hidden fee
    But the ***** has two outside kids that he needs extra cash for
    I cannot count the times that I've shown him to the door
    I never started to miss someone after only a hour
    But I guess thats the love part of it...love has the weirdest power
    But just last year he quit his job without a second thought
    Boy that night we fussed and fought
    And the next morning as I lay in his embrace
    I turned around and looked square in his face
    I know that I love him but he god mad drama in his life
    Has the past five years been worth the sacrifice??
    Will it take five more years for this ***** to get his **** together
    Even though his words make me feel light as a feather
    And wasn't it him who walked to get food when we didn't have a car
    And wasn't it this man who told me wish and he would retrieve that
    lucky star
    But still it was him who spent one hundred twenty five dollars on
    some shoes
    While our son walked around in dirty Blues Clues
    And it was him who bought a sofa that smelled of weed smoke
    Just to sit on the thing made me gag and choke
    But then he Febreezed it and cleaned it up real nice
    And came home that night and cooked chicken and rice
    Before I kicked him out last night he kissed me on my cheek
    And said "Baby you know I got big plans for next week"
    "I got a plan thats gonna set our pockets straight"
    What do I do about this man-continue to LOVE and HATE?
     
  2. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep loving him
    if your love is worth the drama and u have enough faith
    he will turn around
    can't say when
    does he stay with u
     
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    well felt all da emotions flowing
    surely he will need to cross dat
    bridge again keep ya head up high
    with faith & love in ya heart
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew...this was some story
    gotta do what we all do
    and follow our heat
    nobody can fill your shoes
    the way you do...

    flow on poet...
     
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    Sounds like he's got you coming and going, you've got a big decision on your hands....You drew us in with this piece, keep writing.
     
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    hi
    this is a very deep poem you have compose
    reading your release in the flow
    please do flow on
    and let it all flow strong
    much love to you
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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