Black Poetry : I Had Dream

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Had a Dream

    I had a dream
    That one day
    You would go down on bended knee
    And ask for my forever
    I had a dream
    That one day
    You and me
    Would live
    Harmoniously
    Together
    As one
    I had a dream
    That one day
    I would give you a son
    And that son a sister
    And that sister a brother
    I had a dream
    That one day
    My love for you would manifest into
    Your love for me
    I had a dream
    That one day
    I could have the world
    And somewhere
    Anywhere
    You would be in it
    I had a dream
    That my nights
    Would be filled with passionate kisses
    And midnight rendezvous
    I had a dream
    That one day my world , would be perfect
    With you by my side
    I had a dream
    And then I woke up ……..one day
     
  2. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great poem. I'm feelin this one.
    Beautifully written once again.
    Speshly lovin the opening lines:

    I had a dream
    That one day
    You would go down on bended knee
    And ask for my forever
    I had a dream
    That one day
    You and me
    Would live
    Harmoniously
    Together

    And here you gave me mind images:

    I had a dream
    That my nights
    Would be filled with passionate kisses
    And midnight rendezvous

    Love your work.

    *Emma*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dream dream dream
    coz
    one day in dis dream
    will be ya reality

    see this made me see beyond
    I see dis dream
    i vision it in my mind

    loved it ........keep ya pen dripping ink.
     
  4. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stopped looking for perfect a long time ago...

    Nice Natasha.
     
  5. Dream Weaver

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    I had that dream

    Hunny girl,

    Keep dreaming, maybe one day you will wake up and realize you're living the dream.:eek:
     
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