Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Had A Talk With God

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soblessed, Feb 8, 2006.

  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I had a talk with God today
    As I sat in silence
    So many things rushing through my mind
    He came to me

    Child what troubles you?

    Father so many days I forget you
    I do what I want even through it is wrong.

    Child haven't you learned by now
    No matter what you do, I will never forsake you.

    Father I have walked away time and time again

    Oh, Daughter of mine
    I will come and get you you belong to me
    And to my flock

    Father some days my past comes to haunt me
    And I hate the reflection I see.

    My precious child
    That is the enemy trying to take you away from me
    But all that was taken care of at calvary.

    Father, I don't understand why I have gone through
    So much pain and suffering

    My child it is not always for you to understand
    Know this, it is all part of my divine plan

    Father I have experienced so much darkness
    Gone astray and at times I don't even pray.

    My beloved child it is the darkness that brings us to the light
    Even if you go astray, Child you must always pray.

    Father at times I feel like giving up
    I feel like I have no strength to go on.

    My daughter, You must walk in my strength
    Not in your own, This is why things have gone
    Very wrong.

    Abba, My Father,
    Sometimes I get so weak and won't swallow my pride
    And ask please. Please Daddy come help me.

    Ah, Child
    Here is the key, On your knees you humble yourself before me
    All you have to do is believe, Believe I can heal any
    Affliction, sickness or diease.....

    No matter what you have been through
    What you will go through
    I WILL NEVER LEAVE YOUR SIDE
    You must never lose Faith

    Father this walk is so hard.

    My daughter it is as hard as you make it
    Through me, you can do all things.

    Just remember my precious child
    No matter what lies the enemy tells
    Or what will arise
    You have Victory because I am on your side
    Remember to love me
    For I first loved you
    And one day I will say
    This is my beloved child.... In whom I am well pleased.......
     
  2. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Amen .... beautiful
    reminds me of a song .... one day I just might have to sing it for you

    Be blessed
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was simply beautiful gurl love the conversation you had with god. keep up the good work ok. ok.:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Amen sista surely he heard u in convo awesome....
     
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    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Ms_MochaB
    Thank You nevar
    Thank You Richness
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just stay on the plane...
    Your Creator is the pilot of this plane...and he knows, that his child...is on board
     
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    Fellow child of God,
    It's so good to know were not alone in this world
    In this fight, in this maze we call humanity.REGARDLESS!!!!

    This piece demonstrates the intimacy
    God longs to have with His children
    And the intimacy His children should always strive to have with Him.

    GBU for posting such a wonderful and uplifting piece!

    Peace and Love
    twision
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was simply beautiful
    I loved this write poet
    Much love on the depth of your pen
     
  9. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Queent
    Thank you Twision
    Thanks Tantrum
    I realy appreciate the love....
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Sister

    This brought tears to my eyes.

    It's good to know that I'm not the only 1 strugglin in this world fighting against the blows of the enemy.

    One of my favorite lines in your poem...


    Father at times I feel like giving up
    I feel like I have no strength to go on
    .


    and I have to battle that thought often but I know "My"God is real and I shall continue to press on.

    God Bless u soblessed
     
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