Quiet Poetry Lounge : I Had A Dream About You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Destee, Mar 18, 2001.

  1. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i had a dream about you ...
    your sweet presence did make it shake
    now i know the pleasure of a gentle earthquake
    so much more than the gentleman i thought you would be
    my body cried when it felt you in the same room with me
    it's so rare that i dream a dream to remember
    my mind knew, hold it tight and do not surrender
    eyes opening slowly to the start of a flow
    pouring out of me so that you too could know
    capturing this moment to share it with you
    finna go back to sleep for a minute or two
     
  2. saleem

    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Destee

    This is very nice ~ been here!

    And thank you for opening this lounge. You do know what's up! I appreciate that.


    s
     
  3. Destee

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    Hi Saleem,

    Wish I could take credit for our new lounge, but the idea
    came from another Member. They hit the nail on the head huh?

    Thanks for the read.

    :)

    Destee
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'll follow this one up 2morrow,
    this is my song here....

    j'hiah
    writing in his serene garden
     
  5. Destee

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    J'hiah, thanks for the read ... looking forward to hearing your song :heart:

    Kemetstry, i didn't think you'd mind :wink:
    thanks for reading :heart:
     
  6. Applejacque

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    I REALLY got into this one

    This is very sensual. Even going within the boundaries of not being too risque'. I like it,.......
     
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    so beautiful and when u dream of the gentle notions
    u lock it all into a memory where as u can tell the story
    but do go back and rest coz again i shall be .....very sweet
     
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    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonder-full indeed, madam destee ....words scribe'd in soul-filled pleasure...da dream'a life...
     
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    Beautiful peace.....I mos def love to dream!!!

    Respect
    ~Malicious~;)
     
  10. THA HOOKUPMAN

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    had a dream about your voice...lol...sista u need to be on many records your speaking voice is lava ......but u know this ...nice :roll: :roll: drop
     
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