Black Poetry : I Gush ...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Spisces, May 3, 2001.

  1. Spisces

    Spisces Member MEMBER

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    i gush …


    I gush forth beneath
    a bridge of thought
    that is you.

    Our waters languidly
    fill its stream (our)
    consciousness left trembling …

    for in this River's banks
    flows a passion, beyond words
    a depth above knowing.

    Amid memory's moist movement
    we smooth the pebbles lain
    before us.

    touch them in their lying
    and give light that undulates
    back a stream of love …

    renewed.

    *Spisces*
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    thank you for choosing to share
    your flow, your self ... with us

    please know that you are at home
    in the midst of friends & family

    and i love your signature
    couldn't help but smile

    Welcome!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    spisces....(love this name!!)

    This will not be the first time that I have
    welcomed you :) :)

    But it is always so good to see you. Welcome to
    "Flo's" House of Verse where the lyrics are
    tight panties!!

    That piece was my privilege to read and your excellence to share...as usual..I'm str8 feeling your flow

    *gushing*
     
  4. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes!

    the time has cum! THIS IZ awesome!

    welcome home!


    Alyce
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful...

    no other word describes the overall connotation of the piece!

    thanks spisces.

    welcome poet.

    espee.
     
  6. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    umm umm umm

    Our waters languidly
    fill its stream (our)
    consciousness left trembling …

    What better way to put it?!!! I am truly feeling this.
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    umm umm umm
    i second all above
    thanks for sharing
     
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